Great slides Josh! I liked your drawing of the volcano that was just about to erupt, and your description about the volcano erupting made me feel like I was seeing a volcano erupt. Glad I am safe at home :)
Kia ora Josh. Great job creating visual imagery and mood in your sentences and story about a volcano exploding. Awesome picture too! keep up the great work.
Morena Josh, thank you for sharing your mahi (work) with us. I can see you have thought carefully about which words to use in your writing. I particularly like: "blinding light" and "It was very terrifying I could feel my legs shaking." I think my whole body would be shaking in fear if I was near an erupting volcano. (I'm pretty sure I would be screaming too!) You can be proud of this work - ka pai Josh!
Great slides Josh! I liked your drawing of the volcano that was just about to erupt, and your description about the volcano erupting made me feel like I was seeing a volcano erupt. Glad I am safe at home :)
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Kia ora Josh. Great job creating visual imagery and mood in your sentences and story about a volcano exploding. Awesome picture too! keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteI will try to keep up the great work thank you
DeleteMorena Josh, thank you for sharing your mahi (work) with us. I can see you have thought carefully about which words to use in your writing. I particularly like: "blinding light" and "It was very terrifying I could feel my legs shaking." I think my whole body would be shaking in fear if I was near an erupting volcano. (I'm pretty sure I would be screaming too!) You can be proud of this work - ka pai Josh!
ReplyDeleteThank you Miss Whysall.
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