Kia ora Josh. Thanks for sharing your Volcano slideshow. Great work. I really like the way you used shapes to create your own volcano drawing. On the slide where you describe what a volcano is you could try and use some of the scientific words like magma, lava etc. Keep up the great work.
Kia Ora Josh, I agree with Ms O'Shea about drawing your own shapes for the volcano rather than just copying a picture from the internet. I also liked slide 1 which you've written in your own words. Good job! Sheryl
Kia ora Josh. Thanks for sharing your Volcano slideshow. Great work. I really like the way you used shapes to create your own volcano drawing. On the slide where you describe what a volcano is you could try and use some of the scientific words like magma, lava etc. Keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Josh, I agree with Ms O'Shea about drawing your own shapes for the volcano rather than just copying a picture from the internet. I also liked slide 1 which you've written in your own words. Good job! Sheryl
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