Kia Ora bloggers this is my volcano slide,
There are a few things I need to fix but apart from that I think it is pretty good,
if you are wondering why the workers we're in the bath room,
"Thy went to check if anyone was in the bath room.
It took a long time because i did a bit at a time
Keep on waiting the next stop motion will be here soon
What do you think of it ?
Blog ya Later Josh
Kia ora Josh, what a great story, it is obvious that you have put a good amount of time into the planning. I imagine that you have driven a boat before which is why you thought of being able to drive the boat in your story and save everyone, am I correct?
ReplyDeleteYes you are. I have driven a lot of boats But I have never driven a ferry. I would not know how to work it.
DeleteBut i think i would work it out
Blog ya later Josh
Kia ora Josh. Excellent work with your creative disaster story! I can see you have put a lot of effort into it. Well done on making all the changes I suggested. You have included the dialogue markers (speech marks) perfectly. Kapai. I look forward to reading some more of your awesome writing!
ReplyDeleteThank you for commenting on my blog.
DeleteI Will try to keep making stories.
blog ya later J0sh
Hi Josh it's Nisi here, awesome story Josh. I especially love the humour, it made it not so scary. Well done and I look forward to reading some more of your writing.
ReplyDeleteThank you Nisi.
DeleteI will try to keep on making more story's
blog ya later Josh