Great story Josh! I was really able to picture what was happening and what it looked like with your great descriptions. Lots of great 'show not tell' too (My legs turned to jelly and I could not move - brilliant!). Looking forward to reading more of your writing.
Great story Josh! I was really able to picture what was happening and what it looked like with your great descriptions. Lots of great 'show not tell' too (My legs turned to jelly and I could not move - brilliant!). Looking forward to reading more of your writing.
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